The "Rejected"

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The "Rejected"

Postby Roren » Sat Mar 21, 2015 12:44 am

We are the fuck-ups that managed to escape from the A.A.H.W. before we were destroyed. I used to be an ATP engineer. Now, I roam Nevada, finding others who have been rejected. We look after our own, and will do anything to take down the A.A.H.W.
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Snowskeeper » Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:36 am

((Don't mean to piss on your parade, but the A.A.H.W. tends to kill anyone who doesn't fit in. See Sanford and Deimos' wanted posters: "cannot reformat" and "will not reformat" are both listed as high-placing crimes.

You could change that from "the fuck-ups that the A.A.H.W. dumped into society" to "the fuck-ups that managed to escape from the A.A.H.W. before we were destroyed"?

It might also be worth mentioning how you managed to overcome your training and escape, although I'd also understand if you're planning to leave that for Plot Stuff.

//Ducks back into the Forum Underbrush))
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Roren » Sat Mar 21, 2015 2:57 am

Hell, I'm glad I got any feedback at all. Oh, And I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby DarkTree » Sat Mar 21, 2015 2:11 pm

Roren wrote:Hell, I'm glad I got any feedback at all. Oh, And I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.


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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Roren » Sat Mar 21, 2015 3:32 pm

Not yet, pal. Not yet...Ok, maybe its falling down. Its my first time trying to do this.
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby GameZone » Sat Mar 21, 2015 8:58 pm

making fan fictions ain't easy

especially the first time
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Luke DuFaur » Sat Mar 21, 2015 8:59 pm

La-la-la-la-la-lala-la-la
Wait... No seriously its falli---
AHHH! ITS FALLING ON MAI HAU5 NAOOOOOOOO------
God save our gracious Queen,
Long live our noble Queen,
God save the Queen!
Send her victorious,
Happy and glorious,
Long to reign over us,
God save the Queen!

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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Drak » Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:31 am

Luke DuFaur wrote:La-la-la-la-la-lala-la-la
Wait... No seriously its falli---
AHHH! ITS FALLING ON MAI HAU5 NAOOOOOOOO------

*watches from a plane* HAHAHAHAHAHA *looks forward* Well...

that will backfire....

*crushes in a skyscraper*
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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby S070 » Sun Mar 22, 2015 12:53 pm

Drak wrote:
Luke DuFaur wrote:La-la-la-la-la-lala-la-la
Wait... No seriously its falli---
AHHH! ITS FALLING ON MAI HAU5 NAOOOOOOOO------

*watches from a plane* HAHAHAHAHAHA *looks forward* Well...

that will backfire....

*crushes in a skyscraper*

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Re: The "Rejected"

Postby Mechaelite » Sun Mar 22, 2015 1:28 pm

Ah, it is the end of the world already? Damn, damn I'm late.

I need to find my cult clothes and pray to Cthulhu before it is too much late!
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